She is hopeless…
Alone, drowning in bitterness
Silently screaming in the darkness
Hoping someone would save her from loneliness.
She is alone…
Weeping, sobbing on her own.
Tears of blood…but wouldn’t hear her moan
Her heartache, too painful to be shown
She is begging…
For her heart to stop bleeding
During bedtime, she couldn’t stop crying
Can’t hide the pain, oh she’s dying!
She is broken…
Lost soul, trying to find her way home…
Crawling, wondering what would happen.
Will she be saved…or find another empty dome?
@ bittersweet diary 
if she wishes to be saved by darkness , she will find the brighter side. somehow ..
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I was crossing my fingers, hoping for a clutch at the end but you left it open-ended. I hope she finds her way home in a later poem. Interesting read; please, keep writing!
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Her pain isnt left vague through the lyrics..Beautiful💚
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Thank you so much for your beautiful compliments 😄
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Hopefully she’s saved from the loneliness within.
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Reblogged this on darkness76.
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Thank you so much for rebloged, that’s mean the world’s to me 😄
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Very well written. Can feel the pain.
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Reblogged this on Orthometry and commented:
Much pain here.
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Thank you so much for rebloged that’s mean the world to me 😄
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This is amazing.
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Thank you 😊
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Yeahhhh for sure she will find a pattern to move on, cause inside she is strong 😊🤗😊
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Indeed 😄
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🤗🤗👼😉
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She is strong ..too strong to bend..even the mighty sky cries in the rain..but when time comes they bear the storms too..she is a wind, a breeze..and a storm if she want to be one
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Beautiful
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wow, intense and beautiful at the same time.
“Lost soul, trying to find her way home…”
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